Talk:Seriani Kyuna/@comment-35255898-20180725103946/@comment-30515497-20180726011059

If you think about it, BR may or may not be an official game. But that is not my reason.

My main reason is because it is approved by Diamond that Seriani could be one of the main villians for BR, as she connects with Mason in a rivalry way due to her backstory with Veronica as well as she may not be a playable character unlike how most people would intend for her to be.

I'd like to also note that Flare still uses the DB suit and pants, there are plenty of clothes out there you could replace. Sure, BR goes by suits and sometimes vests and/or casual combat clothes.

Also want to note that stacking is used in your moveset, which is basically unoriginal at this point. Even if it isn't DB, it's still something to note in different games if you need to avoid people saying that it's "like" another game. All I really see is that Flare is a stacking Shuu and Kai that gets one-shot unless you upgrade it.

Back to about detail however, yes. It needs all this detail because let's be honest, every community is stupid in it's own way, people could be asking "WHY IS SHE 9" or "WHY DOES SHE HATE MASON SO MUCH!!!" It gets annoying after a while, besides, a wiki is to provide information. Missing information can be portrayed as mystery or just seeming like people don't know what to do.

Including physical information gives people a more clear explanation on how Poly is going to be described and possibly shown when she gets her time. It gives a reasonable idea on why she has to hire so many people to kill Mason because of how she believes she is weak and cannot fight on her own. She goes by how she doesn't think she is able to handle fighting by herself, not by because she wants power.

Lastly, an OC, which is referred to as "Original Character" really HAS to be an original character. For a child to be a villian would have someone think about how they suffered during their younger ages seeing that they finally got treatment and then had it taken away because of someone that their stepmother was interested in.

I don't know if I have to explain myself more, but it's all I have so far. A messy essay. I'm not trying to say that Seriani is better than the others, but maybe if you thought more into story-writing and character development you'll kind of see that it's not just throwing in movesets and appearances hoping that people would find it acceptable.